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my new poem
I wake to a world that moves too fast,
With lessons and tests that never last.
Books and music fill my days,
A quiet storm beneath the praise.
Friends come close, then drift away,
Their laughter bright, their hearts may sway.
I give my all, I help, I care,
Yet sometimes feel that no oneās there.
The nights are long, my thoughts run deep,
I fight the fears I try to keep.
Success and smiles are what they see,
But only I know the cost of me.
Still I walk on, through work and strain,
Through fleeting joy and hidden pain.
The world moves on, the days grow cold,
But I am stronger than theyāre told.
No one saw who I really was,
They all left, though my heart still gives.
Joker once said:
"It's not the stab in the back that hurts. It's when you turn around and see who's holding the knife."
I wake to a world that moves too fast,
With lessons and tests that never last.
Books and music fill my days,
A quiet storm beneath the praise.
Friends come close, then drift away,
Their laughter bright, their hearts may sway.
I give my all, I help, I care,
Yet sometimes feel that no oneās there.
The nights are long, my thoughts run deep,
I fight the fears I try to keep.
Success and smiles are what they see,
But only I know the cost of me.
Still I walk on, through work and strain,
Through fleeting joy and hidden pain.
The world moves on, the days grow cold,
But I am stronger than theyāre told.
No one saw who I really was,
They all left, though my heart still gives.
Joker once said:
"It's not the stab in the back that hurts. It's when you turn around and see who's holding the knife."
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Tvoji poemi so tok relatable. Jz se tok prepoznam v tem, kar ti piÅ”eÅ”. Pa tud ta Jokerjev quote mi je ful vÅ”eÄ.:heart::heart::heart:
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Neprimeren odgovor
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O waw! ful mi je vÅ”eÄ ta pesem..<33:heartpulse::kissing_heart:
A bi Ŕe kakŔen del objavila z kakŔno drugim poem? :grin:
A bi Ŕe kakŔen del objavila z kakŔno drugim poem? :grin:
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hvalaā¤ļøš„°, ta drugi del ne razumem Äisto, kaj si s tem mislila? z drugo temo?
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