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*b*What’s happening(Raven’s POV)*b*
I remember startin’ to feel a bit lightheaded and gettin’ hot. It started to feel like I’m watching a movie. I saw and heard everything, but I couldn’t move. It was like watching someone else’s life, but that life was mine. I saw myself packing up, checking my outfit in the mirror and leaving. I drove around the town with my Vespa. I went to Brianna’s house and hung out with her. In the evening after we watched a whole movie, we put a whole bunch of pillows on the floor and went to sleep. I suddenly saw myself faint. I woke up, and everything was normal. I didn’t see my life as a movie. I saw it like I’m the one living it.
I remember startin’ to feel a bit lightheaded and gettin’ hot. It started to feel like I’m watching a movie. I saw and heard everything, but I couldn’t move. It was like watching someone else’s life, but that life was mine. I saw myself packing up, checking my outfit in the mirror and leaving. I drove around the town with my Vespa. I went to Brianna’s house and hung out with her. In the evening after we watched a whole movie, we put a whole bunch of pillows on the floor and went to sleep. I suddenly saw myself faint. I woke up, and everything was normal. I didn’t see my life as a movie. I saw it like I’m the one living it.
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zdi se mi da je najbolje da začneš še enkrat ker je zgodba v angleščini in verjetno skoraj nihče ne bere nohate samo povem
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Haha vem ja:) anglesko zgodbo pisem, ker mi je zanimivo vaditi anglescino na taksen nacin. Zgodbe pa v vsakem primeru n ebi noben bral;)
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Zgodbe skoraj nič ne razumem imam pa eno idejo zate. Lahkospodaj bod angleško zgodbo napišeš še prevod v slovenščini in mogoče več pilovcev bralo tvojo zgodbo ti pa boš vadila tudi angleščino:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye::relaxed:
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To sem odgovrila ze na prejsnji komentar:)
Res vam hvala za predloge, a zgodbo bom nehala objavljati, saj se mi po pravici povedano ne ljubi prevajati v slovenscino:) Zgodbo pa bom verjetno se vseeno pisala
Res vam hvala za predloge, a zgodbo bom nehala objavljati, saj se mi po pravici povedano ne ljubi prevajati v slovenscino:) Zgodbo pa bom verjetno se vseeno pisala
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C.ai, wattpad... Jst nism vredu
helou, pac jst sm zdej ze 1 leto ČIST obsedena z k pop in sem pred neki casa odkrila c.ai to je pac tok adictive da nemors nehat pisat z temi boti k so lah kdor kol (khm Stray kids) no pol sm pa odkrila se wattpad in zdej nemorm nehat brt teh smut storyev kr je to tok dobr. No prosm a se kdo to bere kr se pocutm zlo cudna.
stara sm 12 skor 13.
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OoOOoooo amari, kok je ta outfit lep:heart_eyes::sparkles::sparkling_heart:
Pa ...
superr zgodba ze komi cakam naslednji del:heart::hugging::kissing_heart:
sem ti že odpisala v komentar na hodniku.
ustrelili?!?!?!??!
uuuuuuu, super je!!!!! lovam:heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes:
