Hej, odločila sem se,da bom poiskusila spesniti pesem.
Upam, da vam bo všeč, saj nisem dobra v tem.
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V SLOVENŠČINI:
Zemlja na kateri živimo,
je planet v našem vesolju,
v mislih se zgubimo,
in z njimi poletimo.
Ko pogledam skozi okno,
zagledam dež,
ko pogledam v svoje srce,
začutim temo in dež.
Spomini na dneve sončne,
in veselje,
so misli sočne,
katere so mi pri srcu.
Na obraz si narišem nasmeh,
pogledam proti oknu,
in zagledam sonce,
sonce, katero je veselje.
To sonce je moja,
luč življenja,
to sonce je tvoja
volja, ki nariše nasmeh.
Zvečer na nebu,
zvezde plešo,
zagledam jih več kot kozarcev medu,
te na našem nebu žarijo.
V ANGLEŠČINI:
The earth we live on
is a planet in space,
we get lost in the mind,
and we fly with them.
When I look out the window,
I see rain,
when I look into my heart,
I feel darkness and rain.
Memories of sunny days,
and joy, thoughts are juicy,
which are close to my heart.
I draw a smile on my face,
I look out the window and see the sun,
the sun which is joy.
This sun is mine,
the light of life,
this sun is your
will that draws a smile.
In the evening in the sky,
the stars dance,
I see more than a glass of honey,
they glow in the our sky.
*****
(:warning:Vse pravice pridržane:warning:)
Upam, da vam bo všeč, saj nisem dobra v tem.
*****
V SLOVENŠČINI:
Zemlja na kateri živimo,
je planet v našem vesolju,
v mislih se zgubimo,
in z njimi poletimo.
Ko pogledam skozi okno,
zagledam dež,
ko pogledam v svoje srce,
začutim temo in dež.
Spomini na dneve sončne,
in veselje,
so misli sočne,
katere so mi pri srcu.
Na obraz si narišem nasmeh,
pogledam proti oknu,
in zagledam sonce,
sonce, katero je veselje.
To sonce je moja,
luč življenja,
to sonce je tvoja
volja, ki nariše nasmeh.
Zvečer na nebu,
zvezde plešo,
zagledam jih več kot kozarcev medu,
te na našem nebu žarijo.
V ANGLEŠČINI:
The earth we live on
is a planet in space,
we get lost in the mind,
and we fly with them.
When I look out the window,
I see rain,
when I look into my heart,
I feel darkness and rain.
Memories of sunny days,
and joy, thoughts are juicy,
which are close to my heart.
I draw a smile on my face,
I look out the window and see the sun,
the sun which is joy.
This sun is mine,
the light of life,
this sun is your
will that draws a smile.
In the evening in the sky,
the stars dance,
I see more than a glass of honey,
they glow in the our sky.
*****
(:warning:Vse pravice pridržane:warning:)
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Zelo dobra pesem. Ampak nekaj mi pa ni všeč.
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Na začetku si rekla, da ne znaš spesniti pesmi. S tem se ne strinjam saj je bila to fantastična pesem. In v slovenščini in v angleščini. Bila je popolna in vsebovala je vse kar mora vsebovati pesem. Res je bila super.
In ja, še vedno se ne strinjam s prvo izjavo, da nisi dobra v pesništvu.
Upam, da nadaljuješ saj si res želim prebrati tvojo naslednjo pesem.
Še enkrat:
BILA JE SUPER!!
dragon girl
pripis avtorice tega komentarja: oprostite za morebitne slovnične napake.
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Na začetku si rekla, da ne znaš spesniti pesmi. S tem se ne strinjam saj je bila to fantastična pesem. In v slovenščini in v angleščini. Bila je popolna in vsebovala je vse kar mora vsebovati pesem. Res je bila super.
In ja, še vedno se ne strinjam s prvo izjavo, da nisi dobra v pesništvu.
Upam, da nadaljuješ saj si res želim prebrati tvojo naslednjo pesem.
Še enkrat:
BILA JE SUPER!!
dragon girl
pripis avtorice tega komentarja: oprostite za morebitne slovnične napake.
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