Napisala sem pesem o izgubi bližnjega oz. v tem primeru izgubi ljubljene.
The biggest loss in my life
The voices in my head are telling me I'm not worth enough,
I know it's true that the life is rough.
But can I have just bit of confidence,
becouse right now nothing makes sense.
The closest ones are leaving me,
and me and I are no longer we.
My heart is broken into pieces,
but I still have the feeling of hers gentle kisses.
She was my everything on this world
but she is gone now, what the fu*k have I done my lord.
To deserve the biggest loss in my life
happening when I started to think she'll be my wife.
I wanna end IT,
because my life right now is literal bullsh*t.
The biggest loss in my life
The voices in my head are telling me I'm not worth enough,
I know it's true that the life is rough.
But can I have just bit of confidence,
becouse right now nothing makes sense.
The closest ones are leaving me,
and me and I are no longer we.
My heart is broken into pieces,
but I still have the feeling of hers gentle kisses.
She was my everything on this world
but she is gone now, what the fu*k have I done my lord.
To deserve the biggest loss in my life
happening when I started to think she'll be my wife.
I wanna end IT,
because my life right now is literal bullsh*t.
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OMG to je tak dobro!
Js sm po horoskopu rak:cancer: in mi smo ful emotional tak da sem se dobesedno jokala zraven. Mam pa eno prošnjo, bi lahko napisala še eno tako oesem z istim pomenom ampak iz ženskega pogleda?
Že naprej hvala,
Lp,
Eva
LYSM
Js sm po horoskopu rak:cancer: in mi smo ful emotional tak da sem se dobesedno jokala zraven. Mam pa eno prošnjo, bi lahko napisala še eno tako oesem z istim pomenom ampak iz ženskega pogleda?
Že naprej hvala,
Lp,
Eva
LYSM
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OoOOoooo amari, kok je ta outfit lep:heart_eyes::sparkles::sparkling_heart:
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superr zgodba ze komi cakam naslednji del:heart::hugging::kissing_heart:
sem ti že odpisala v komentar na hodniku.
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