Pisalnicasuicide of her
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my love would open her skin
she'd stand in the mirror, her body to thin
alive she would mourn, but dead she would sing
my love would do all to end this whole thing
a knife in her hand and sorrow in heart
red on her skin where she cut it apart
nothing at all where once has been joy
no happines or love, only urge to destroy
she would walk on the edge and carry a knife
no wish to survive, only ending her life
my love was fighting, drowning in sorrow
without joy or smiles, no seeing tomorrow
she looked in the mirror and decieded she'll starve
into her skin tattooes she would carve
enjoing her pain but wanting to die
at the end too tired even to lie
sirens and places covered in white
doctors wondering if she'll live through the night
her eyes are closed, she looks at peace
but she's falling apart, piece by piece
soon her home is covered in black
and though I know she's not coming back
I scream on the inside for I remember her well
and now she's alone in her personal hell
she'd stand in the mirror, her body to thin
alive she would mourn, but dead she would sing
my love would do all to end this whole thing
a knife in her hand and sorrow in heart
red on her skin where she cut it apart
nothing at all where once has been joy
no happines or love, only urge to destroy
she would walk on the edge and carry a knife
no wish to survive, only ending her life
my love was fighting, drowning in sorrow
without joy or smiles, no seeing tomorrow
she looked in the mirror and decieded she'll starve
into her skin tattooes she would carve
enjoing her pain but wanting to die
at the end too tired even to lie
sirens and places covered in white
doctors wondering if she'll live through the night
her eyes are closed, she looks at peace
but she's falling apart, piece by piece
soon her home is covered in black
and though I know she's not coming back
I scream on the inside for I remember her well
and now she's alone in her personal hell
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Wooooow:heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes: se zavedaš kakšen talent imaš, ta pesem je še bolj neverjetna kot prejšnja!! Ne vem kako ti uspe napisat tako dobro pesem, ki ima odličen ritem in se zelo lepo rima in to še v angleščini!:hushed::scream::smirk:
Če boš kdaj želela postati pesnica, verjamem, da boš v tem poklicu zelo uspešna.:wink::kissing_heart:
Komaj čakam še kakšno tvojo pesem (saj boš napisala še kakšno?)!
Lepo se mej in piši naprej! <3
~ tvoja največja fenica iMusic
Če boš kdaj želela postati pesnica, verjamem, da boš v tem poklicu zelo uspešna.:wink::kissing_heart:
Komaj čakam še kakšno tvojo pesem (saj boš napisala še kakšno?)!
Lepo se mej in piši naprej! <3
~ tvoja največja fenica iMusic
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... Def nisem na robu solz, o čem blebetaš *gre jokat v kot*
Tole je tako dobro, če bi jaz lahko tako pisala pesmi, bi bila blazno ponosna, ker tole je pure fuel za mene in moje solze :) Mogla bi se učit bioligjo in lej kje sem- spet.
Fenomenalno in krasno in awesome all around <3
~Raven
Tole je tako dobro, če bi jaz lahko tako pisala pesmi, bi bila blazno ponosna, ker tole je pure fuel za mene in moje solze :) Mogla bi se učit bioligjo in lej kje sem- spet.
Fenomenalno in krasno in awesome all around <3
~Raven
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Hvala ti! Tvoje pesmi so tut ful dobre, sem prebrala in res upam, da objaviš še kakšno!
Glede biologije - same girl tut js bi se mogla ucit ampak namest tega sm tuki lol
Glede biologije - same girl tut js bi se mogla ucit ampak namest tega sm tuki lol
Itak <3 ! Hvala, delam na njih, hehe
Lmao mi mamo danes test iz angleščine... Mislim saj znam angeško ampak učila se pa tud nism
Lmao mi mamo danes test iz angleščine... Mislim saj znam angeško ampak učila se pa tud nism
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hej poglejte si prejšnjo objavo če je niste prebrali. torej nadaljevanje: mogoče ga bom dodala ampak naslednji teden, ker želom da mava ta teden velik eye contactov in ker je ravno po počotnicah ane, in hoč da me bolj "opazi" no povedala sem svoji zlo dobri prjatlci da sem v njega in je tko pokazala z roko da je on višji od mene, in je rekla on je tak ( kot ful visok) jaz pa taka🤏( kot ful majhna), ampak je res da je malo višji od mene ni pa zdej najvišji devetar na šoli, jih je veliko tako kot on ali pa še višji, pa tutdi menim da ce sta fant in punca skupaj je vseeno ce je famt visji od punce. ampak zdej mi je dala misliti in mi spet naredila kup vrtoglavic v glavi ker imam dvome glede tega ali bo ga sploh dodala in imela eye contacte......
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