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I moved out of my father’s house as soon as I could and started over in a new town with a new name. I had it legally changed. I’ve had enough of the death that haunted our family. I didn’t want to have anything to do with Him.

and yet I did he came back

November 1993. Like usually at breakfast, I was reading the newspaper, hoping to see any available jobs. I was ready to be disappointed again, but then… I saw it.

HELP WANTED
Freddy Fazbear’s Pizzeria
Family pizzeria looking for a security guard to work the nightshift. From 12 AM to 6 AM.
Monitor cameras, ensure safety of equipment and animatronic characters.
Not responsible for injury/dismemberment.

I felt my breakfast coming back up my throat. How was this place still open? More importantly, why do they need a security guard? That was a stupid question. People died there. Of course they need someone to look after the place and to blame if anything goes wrong.
Of course I knew about the children. I might be crazy, but not stupid. I found His blueprints, notes, everything. As much as I wanted to forget everything, I needed to know what was going on at Freddy’s now.

I knew who He was

I applied for the job. I knew that people working there probably won’t recognize me. There was no one named Mike Schmidt that committed a crime there, not that I know of. I didn’t know what I’d do if I met Him. Even though, did it really matter? He wouldn’t recognize me anyways. He didn’t see me since 1988. He wouldn’t care. He never did.

but He did He remembered

A week later, I was sitting in the tiny security office at Freddy’s. It was my 7th and last night there. I’ve seen enough. I knew that the children’s souls were trapped in the animatronics. They possessed them. Like my brother.
They wanted to kill me. They thought I was Him. And if they recognized that face, He would too. No doubt.
At this point, when I was scared for my life, I… I think I missed Him. Despite all the bad things he’s done. I wanted to apologize. For the yelling. For the swearing. For everything. I don’t think He would care, though. It was weird. I hated him, right? I didn’t know. Even now, thirty years later, I’m still not entirely sure how I feel about Him.



The pizzeria was shut down that week, but it wasn’t destroyed like the previous locations. It was just left to rot there. For thirty years.

and then He came back
 

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