PisalnicaA poem
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Silence
I close my eyes....silence.
The dark space in my mind where the thoughts are supposed to be.silent.empty.
I open my eyes.....silence.
The house, the home thats supposed to be screaming around me, at me even, with happines. silent.empty.
I go outside...silence.
The life that surounds me...silent.
The happy memories died, making space for new, not so happy ones.
Do i speak? No i am silent. At this point, I am silence itself. My mind-silent. My house-silent. My life-silent. No thoughts, no memories.
Just an empty shell with a beating heart struggling to find something worth it.
Am i right to be silent? To not speak at all?
And I just listen to myself disapearing into the empty space called my mind.
Where even the loudest of voices are quieted down.
Silenced.
I close my eyes....silence.
The dark space in my mind where the thoughts are supposed to be.silent.empty.
I open my eyes.....silence.
The house, the home thats supposed to be screaming around me, at me even, with happines. silent.empty.
I go outside...silence.
The life that surounds me...silent.
The happy memories died, making space for new, not so happy ones.
Do i speak? No i am silent. At this point, I am silence itself. My mind-silent. My house-silent. My life-silent. No thoughts, no memories.
Just an empty shell with a beating heart struggling to find something worth it.
Am i right to be silent? To not speak at all?
And I just listen to myself disapearing into the empty space called my mind.
Where even the loudest of voices are quieted down.
Silenced.
Odgovori:
Zabaven odgovor
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Neprimeren odgovor
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bbg that's so beautifulllll talent massss remember that
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Moj odgovor:
Nashbsbs
potrebuje pomoč ali nasvet v
Svetovalnica
Fant
dober dan,
mene zanima vaše mnenje tk pol leta nazaj sem pustila fanta ker se mi ni dalo več črprav je vse delal prav ampak zivi dalec stran dve uri z avtu in pac se mi ni dalo vec pa starsim nisem upala povedat za njega. No in on me mq se vedno rad in js bi sla nazaj skup z njemu in bi povedala starsem da pac bi lahk prespala pri njemu pa on pri men..
no ja kako naj povem starsem in a naj grem nazaj skuo z njemu?
mene zanima vaše mnenje tk pol leta nazaj sem pustila fanta ker se mi ni dalo več črprav je vse delal prav ampak zivi dalec stran dve uri z avtu in pac se mi ni dalo vec pa starsim nisem upala povedat za njega. No in on me mq se vedno rad in js bi sla nazaj skup z njemu in bi povedala starsem da pac bi lahk prespala pri njemu pa on pri men..
no ja kako naj povem starsem in a naj grem nazaj skuo z njemu?
