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I remember startin’ to feel a bit lightheaded and gettin’ hot. It started to feel like I’m watching a movie. I saw and heard everything, but I couldn’t move. It was like watching someone else’s life, but that life was mine. I saw myself packing up, checking my outfit in the mirror and leaving. I drove around the town with my Vespa. I went to Brianna’s house and hung out with her. In the evening after we watched a whole movie, we put a whole bunch of pillows on the floor and went to sleep. I suddenly saw myself faint. I woke up, and everything was normal. I didn’t see my life as a movie. I saw it like I’m the one living it.
I remember startin’ to feel a bit lightheaded and gettin’ hot. It started to feel like I’m watching a movie. I saw and heard everything, but I couldn’t move. It was like watching someone else’s life, but that life was mine. I saw myself packing up, checking my outfit in the mirror and leaving. I drove around the town with my Vespa. I went to Brianna’s house and hung out with her. In the evening after we watched a whole movie, we put a whole bunch of pillows on the floor and went to sleep. I suddenly saw myself faint. I woke up, and everything was normal. I didn’t see my life as a movie. I saw it like I’m the one living it.
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zdi se mi da je najbolje da začneš še enkrat ker je zgodba v angleščini in verjetno skoraj nihče ne bere nohate samo povem
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Haha vem ja:) anglesko zgodbo pisem, ker mi je zanimivo vaditi anglescino na taksen nacin. Zgodbe pa v vsakem primeru n ebi noben bral;)
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Zgodbe skoraj nič ne razumem imam pa eno idejo zate. Lahkospodaj bod angleško zgodbo napišeš še prevod v slovenščini in mogoče več pilovcev bralo tvojo zgodbo ti pa boš vadila tudi angleščino:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye::relaxed:
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To sem odgovrila ze na prejsnji komentar:)
Res vam hvala za predloge, a zgodbo bom nehala objavljati, saj se mi po pravici povedano ne ljubi prevajati v slovenscino:) Zgodbo pa bom verjetno se vseeno pisala
Res vam hvala za predloge, a zgodbo bom nehala objavljati, saj se mi po pravici povedano ne ljubi prevajati v slovenscino:) Zgodbo pa bom verjetno se vseeno pisala
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