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ME AND MY PERFECT BROTHER 36. DEL/KONEC

Vdihnem, ter izdihnem. Stopim na oder… John se mi nasmehne, ter prikima. Zraven mene je Mike Morgan in Jack Black. Mike udari bo bobnih, Jack pa 'zareže' po električni kitari. Vdihnem in se pridružim Johnu med petjem. Slišim glasne vzklike, ter ploskanje publike. Prepustim se glasbi in pojem, kot še nikoli. Uživala sem v tem.
Zagledam svoje prijatelje. Brian, Claro, Kaya, Noaha in Evo. Smejijo se, ter plešejo. Clara je po petih letih zapustila, dom in sedaj živi z njenim fantom, pri njegovih starših. Noah in Kay živita na samem z njunima otrokoma, ki sta ju posvojila. Že da sta stara komaj štiriindvajset let a sta odlična starša! Eva je obžalovala vse stare grehe, ki mi jih je naredila a sem ji odpustila. Skupaj z Claro smo najboljše prijateljice.
Sledil je moj solo. Pozabila sem na prijatelje in pela na vso grlo. Glas sem vse bolj stopnjevala in zadela najvišji ton. Naredila sem nekaj, česar se nismo zmenili med treningom. Publika je osupnila. Vsa zadihana zapojem še enkrat nato pa John prevzame njegov solo. Zaprem oči in razmišljam. Od samega začetka… Moje življenje se je spremenilo že pri mojih šestih letih. Nato sta me posvojila Ray in Mary. Premestila sta me na šolo, kjer so me zaničevali… Bila sem napol depresivna…
Nato sem spoznala Briana… Mojega fanta! Kaj bi jaz brez njega počela na tem svetu? Zazrem se v njegove temne lase. Smejal se mi je in vpil: »Bravo Evelyn!!!« Nasmehnem se mu in zapojem zaključek. Glasba utihne in publika ponori. Z Johnom odidem z odra. Mike in Jack nama sledita. »Bravo! Kako si… Neverjetno!« Mike se mi smeji in objel me je čez ramena. »Žal nam bi bilo če te nebi vzeli!« Nasmehnem se jim in prikimam.
Nato se posvetim Johnu. »Kam boš šel ti?« Naj se pohvalim. Postala sem teta! John je zapustil očeta in v mestu spoznal punco z imenom Caitlin in z njo ima otroka, ter sta poročena že par let. To je bil njegov zadnji nastop, ki ga je pripravil. Odločil se je, da pusti vse skupaj in se odpravi po drugi poti. Razumem ga. »Caitlin in Nick me čakata… Domov bom šel, ker je že pozno… Jutri lahko proslavimo naš zadnji nastop.« Pomežikne mi. »Zate še ni zadnji.« Prikimam in se nasmehnem. »Uživaj bratec!« Objamem ga, ter poljubim na lice. Stečem k svojim prijateljem, ki me veselo pričakujejo. »Publika želi vaše avtograme.« Prhnem. »Nič ne bo, ker takoj gremo!« Noah in Kay prikimata. »Ana in Klay verjetno že spita… Mama zna z otroci.«
»Kam bomo šli?« Naj pomislim… Domov bi lahko šli a vem, da se družba nebi strinjala. »Dann bo prišel pome tako, da se lahko jutri sestanemo če vam je v redu.« Claro objamem. »Hvala, ker si prišla!«
»Kadarkoli sončece!« Planeva v smeh in jo še enkrat objamem. Eva pomaha in se ji pridruži. Ostali smo še samo jaz, Brian, Noah in Kay. Da ne pozabim publike, ki je želela avtograme. Hitro se podpišem najbližnjim osebam nato pa odhitimo stran. »Odlična si bila!« Danes je tudi moja in Brianova obletnica. Skupaj sva že celih osem let. Nekaj je pripravil in to ne rabim tri krat ugibati.
»Pridi, odpeljali se bomo v en apartma, kjer bomo prenočili.« Nasmehnem se. Odpravimo se v Noahov avto in mi zaprejo oči. Ne peljemo se kar dolgo. Na uro nisem morala pogledati, ker sem imela oči trdno zavezane. Če bi nas kdo ustavil bi zagotovo mislil, da so me ugrabil.
Ustavimo se. Brian me prime okoli pasu, da se zdrznem ob njegovem toplem dotiku. Prevezo sname iz mojih oči. Stali smo pred hišo… »Najin nov dom.« Usta si pokrijem z dlani. »Kaj?! Si… Kaj..?« Nasmehne se. Stečem v hišo. Bila sem vsa navdušena, ter šokirana. Kako?! Odpravim se na balkon in opazujem zvezde na nebu. Zapihal je veter. Počutila sem se kot, da bi lebdela na zraku. Za sabo zaslišim Brianove korake. Obrnem se in… »Evelyn Jones… Bi se poročila z mano?« Zraven mene je klečal in v rokah držal prstan. Solze sreče mi stečejo po obrazu. Ostala sem brez besed. Naenkrat kriknem. »JAAAAA!!!!« Objamem Briana, ter ga poljubim. Na roko mi natakne bleščeč zlat prstan. Jokam od sreče. Še enkrat ga poljubim tokrat bolj strastno. Opazim Noaha, ki stoji ob oknu in se joče od sreče. »CELEMU SVETU MORMAM POVEDATI ZA TA DOGOTEK!!!« Steče stran in začne kričati: »MOJA NAJBOLJŠA PRIJATELJICA SE BO POROČILA! STRIC BOM! KAY STRICA BOVA! NE MOREM VERJETI! PRIČA BOM!!!« Planem v smeh in še enkrat poljubim Briana. Vdihnem in se zazrem v temno nebo in si predstavljam mamo, kako se tukaj smeji in joče od veselja. Moje življenje se je iz popolnoma uničenega spremenilo v popolnoma sanjsko življenje, ki ga nikoli ne želim izgubiti.
KONEC

ZDRAVO!
Pa smo le prišli do konca! Upam da vam je bil del všeč! REEEESSSS HVALAAA VSEM KI STE SPREMLJALI OD ZAČETKA DO KONCA IN VSEM NOVIM BRALCEM VSEM!!!!!! LYSMMMMMMMMM GUYS!!!!!!!!
Jutri pride po vsej verjetnosti nov del NOVE zgodbe. HVALAAAAA!!!!!!!!
Lp, Bad girl

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:sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob:Neeee:heart_exclamation::sparkles:
Oboževala sem to zgodbo:sparkles::sparkles::sparkles::sob:
Res si prava pisateljica:heart: to zgodbo bom nenormalno pogrešala:sob::sob::sob::pensive::pensive::pensive:
Zelo mi je pri srcu:cherry_blossom:
Super del:two_hearts::two_hearts::two_hearts::two_hearts::two_hearts::two_hearts:
Zelo dobro si napisala (nažalost) zadnji del:two_hearts::two_hearts::two_hearts::sob::sob::sob:
Pogrešala bom vse na tej zgodbi:heart::pensive::pensive::heart:
Zelo lepo si se potrudila za nov (zadnji) del:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::pray::pray::pray::pray::pray::pray:
Hvala za vse lepe trnutke v tej zgodbi:two_hearts:
Rada imam to zgodbo in se teško poslovim od nje:sob::sob::sob:
Rada te imam:sparkles::sparkles::sparkles::heart_exclamation::heart_exclamation::heart_exclamation:
Lp, tvoja (zdaj žalostna) Violinka:sob:

Violinka

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Obljubim, da bom napisala novo zgodbo in se bom še bolj potrudila. Ta je tudi imela kar nekaj napak v tisti se bom pa poskusila bolj organizirati in boljše napisati dele. HVALA TIII!!!! LYSMMM💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

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Super! Samo na začetku sem se malo zgubila, ker nisem vedela, kdaj se dogaja... DRUGAČE PA NEVERJETNO! :heart::yellow_heart::heart::yellow_heart::heart::yellow_heart::heart::yellow_heart::heart::yellow_heart::heart::yellow_heart:

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ooooooooooo! TAK SE ZAKLJUČI DBEST ZGODBO! WOW! FUL SEM HAPPY, DA SE JE TAK KONČALA! SVOJOŽALOST GLEDE ZGODBE BOM LAHKO POTEŠILA S TEM, DA BO GLAVNA JUNAKINJA IMELA DBEST LIFE! BAD GIRL, RES ZAŽIGAŠ!

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Zelo lep konec. Malo bo čudno, ko bom vsak dan odpirala pisalnico in upala, da se bo pojavil naslov ME AND MY PERFECT BROTHER. Super zgodbo si ustvarila. Lepo bodi

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Waw!! Kak super konec!! Tako se zaključi!!
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Škoda, ker je konec ampak komaj čakam na novo zgodbo!!
Zdaj pa.........................jo pojdi pisati!! To je ukaz (hecam se (ali pa ne (:joy::innocent:)))!

Cool Girl

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ooo kako romantičen konec! enkratno! res obvladaš! a me še prepoznaš??? tista zmešana kaki2010:joy::heart_eyes::stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:? res sem tvoja velika fenica in upam da tudi ti spremljaš mene.
LYSMAYB (LOVE YOU SO MUCH AND YOUR BLOG):joy:.

Kaki2010

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aww hvalaaa!!! ja seveda da se te še spomnim ahaha. tvoj blog je ENKRATEN
Kdj pride nov del?
LYSM💕💕💕💕

Kaki2010

iiiiiiiiiiiiiii odgovorila si mi! ne veš kako mi to pomeni da mi odgovori taka dobra blogarka! prav počaščena sem vaše veličanstvo! ahahahahahhahhaha! blog pride danes.
LYSMT (love you so much to)

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Kaki2010

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NEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Tako zelo sem žalostna, da je to konec. Z veseljem bi brala naprej...
Konec je ODLIČEN! SUPER!!!!!!!!
Hvala, hvala, da si z mano (z nami) delila to fenomenalno zgodbo, ki je zame (in najbrž za vse) nekaj nepozabnega!
Komaj, komaj čakam novi del nove zgodbe!
Bravo, Bad girl! Kapo dol, punca!
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JustLilly

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TO.............JE..............NAJBOLJŠI........DEL........TE..........ZGODBE...........EVER..............V..........MOJMU..........LAJFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!
JAZ KAR JOKAM, TAKO DOBER KONEC JE BIL!!:heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::he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FENOMENALNO!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAA POROČILA SE BOSTA IN KAY TER NOAH STA SKUPAJJJJJJJJ:heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye::stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye::stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye::stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye::stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye::stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye::stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes:

Po drugi strani je pa kar malo sad, da je konec:sleepy::sleepy::sleepy::sleepy::sleepy:

OBOŽUJEM TE!
lp,
B#13:hamster::green_heart::heart::hamster:

Billie#13

Bad girl

ahaha, AWWEEEE HVALA TIIIII!!!!!!! LYSMMM💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

Billie#13

lysmt (love you so much too)

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Zakaj zadnji del ne:sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::cry::cry::cry::cry::cry::cry: Pa zakaj:sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::cry::cry::cry::cry::cry::cry: Upam da bo una k jo boš pol napisala ful dobra ker je bla ta zakon!!!

Sladkorček

Bad girl

HVALAAAA!!!! Ja če želiš lahko kar sedaj objavim😂😂😂💕💕💕💕💕

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Kok cute! Res to je najboljša zgodba ever! Res nevem, kaj bom sedaj ko jo je konec. LYSM :heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes:

I love dance:)

Bad girl

ahaha, HVALAAAAA!!!!💕💕💕💕💕💕

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Omg!
Naravnost OMG!
Ne vem kaj naj rečem!
Moram reči da je bila to ena od zelo lepih zgodb!
Res lepo!
Pač begiii! BRAVO! S-U-P-E-R!
Fulllll bom pogrešala to zgodbo in sem vsak dan čakala, da bom z veseljem prebrala novi del!
Res si zaslužiš eno veliko pohvalo! BRAVO!:sparkling_heart::sparkling_heart::sparkling_heart::sparkling_heart::sparkling_heart::ok_hand::ok_hand::ok_hand::ok_hand::ok_hand::clap::clap::clap::clap::clap:

Pomaranča1

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hvalaaaaaa!!!!!!💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

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Super konec!!!!!

PercyPotterfan

Bad girl

hvalaaaa!!!!💕💕💕💕💕

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Odličen konec!!! Ampak za kaj je že konec?!?!:sob::sob::sob::sob::sob:

Hermiona 17

Bad girl

HVALAAAA!!!! Ker nimam več ideje😔💕💕💕💕💕

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T OJE PA NORO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ampak mi je mal škoda da je konec ker je bilo ful kul!!!:heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes: ZELO dober konec!

LOL

Bad girl

HVALAAAAA!!!!!💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

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VAVVVVV! TO JE TOK SUPEEEEERR ZGODBA! SE STRINJAM Z VSEMI, DA BI BILA TO ODLIČNA KNJIGA! :heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes: ODLIČNA PISATELJICA SI!!!!!!!!:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

Lily

Bad girl

HVALA TIIII!!!!!!!💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

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vav, SUPER zgodba, srečen konec. Tudi jaz jo pišem in je OBUPNA!
ps. ne vem kako ti uspe:heart:

Crazyemojigirl

Bad girl

hehe, HVALA TIII!!!!💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

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o to je super jaz tudi pišem zgodbo in jo noben ne gleda nevem kako ti to rata

balerina

Bad girl

Hvala ti! Hmm... Mogoče napiši v smetišnico... Jaz sicer nisem, sem samo za prvi del in zadnji del.
Lp

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omg takooo dobra zgodba. zakaj je je konec...neeeeeeeeeeee. tako dobro pišeš. tok je dobra. wwaaaaaaaawa:heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart::heart::heart::heart::two_hearts:

ajdi

Bad girl

hvalaaaaaa!!!!!!!!💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

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Njaboljši konec možno! Bravooo! Ta zgodba je bila več kot epska!!!:heart::heart:

happyGIRL

girl

Bad girl

HVALAAAAAA💕💕💕💕🥺🥺🥺

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Pa dej zresni se plis. PRVIČ sem šla brat Me and mt prefect brother in pol KONEC piše tam jaz sem tko: "Im gonna kill u"
Lol, Nsn, ampak je resno spketakularno. Mogla bi narest kkno nadaljenvanje.
Čavv

Pilovka 1

Bad girl

AHHAHAHAHAHAA, HVALAAAAAAAA💕💕💕💕🥺🥺🥺

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Pisalnica

kakapetovapcic

Objava:

kaka 3.del

Ogledov: 7 Odgovorov: 2

Beatrice

Objava:

IGRA 36. del

Ogledov: 33 Odgovorov: 1

annabeth-chase

Objava:

Božičkova družina 2. del

Ogledov: 10 Odgovorov: 1

Roxy. E

Objava:

SAMO PLEŠI🌸 41. del

Ogledov: 19 Odgovorov: 3

#sedmošolka

Objava:

Študentka detektivka, 26. del

Ogledov: 12 Odgovorov: 0

Morska zelvica

Objava:

Klarine dogodivščine - Vila skrivnosti 2. del

Ogledov: 16 Odgovorov: 0

pig lover 🐷

Objava:

SRCE NARAVE 1.DEL

Ogledov: 25 Odgovorov: 1

gimnasic girl

Objava:

prijateljstvo

Ogledov: 34 Odgovorov: 3

Nwm kj potrebuje pomoč ali nasvet v

Svetovalnica

Vprasanje

Sry če se kermu zdi ne dlih primerna objava. Stara sm 13 let. In dns sm si lrst porinila tam uspodi v lukno ne v rit. Mene je strah k jeprst kr debel. a je to kjnarobe da sm to nardila. A se lahkh kej zgodi ce bi to se delala?

Pisalnica - Navodila

*roza*Pisalnica je namenjena branju, ustvarjanju in komentiranju izmišljenih zgodb ali pesmi. Izid zgodbe lahko napoveš in s tem povečaš napetost in pričakovanje bralcev. Odločiš se lahko tudi, da nadaljevanja tvoje zgodbe izhajajo ob istih terminih, da bodo oboževalci tvojih zgodb vedno vedeli, kdaj lahko pridejo po nove bralne zalogaje. Če nisi za marketinške trike, pa lahko zgodbo objaviš tudi takoj. *roza*
*zelena*PRAVILA:*zelena*
Mlade pisatelje in komentatorje zgodb pozivamo, da so vljudni in spoštljivi. Prepovedano je žaljenje in pozivanje k razkritju identitete.
*roza*POMEMBNO: *roza**modra*Če naletite na kakršnokoli neprimerno objavo, kliknite na kolešček v spodnjem desnem kotu objave in izberite možnost "Prijavi". Tako nam pomagate našo stran ohranjati prijetno in varno!*modra*

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Kako vam je všeč zgodba v Pilu?

Zelo mi je všeč.

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Srednje.

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Ni mi všeč.

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