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Hej hoj! Tukaj je po kar nekaj časa moja nova poezija. :purple_heart::black_heart:
Bye! (ta je po resničnih dogodkih)
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*b*YOU*b*
You don't understand my pain,
you don't know my depression.
You don't understand the weight of my thoughts in my brain,
you don't know my obssesion.
And I wanna leave you,
I wanna forget you.
And I wanna stop crying about thinking to tell this to you,
I wanna get those thoughts out of my head just for you.
I need you to be here,
but you don't see me crying.
I need you to be near,
but you don't hear my heavy sighing.
And now you want me to tell you,
how and why I become so new.
The answer is not clear to you,
'cause you don't know it was sometimes worse with you.
Bye! (ta je po resničnih dogodkih)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*b*YOU*b*
You don't understand my pain,
you don't know my depression.
You don't understand the weight of my thoughts in my brain,
you don't know my obssesion.
And I wanna leave you,
I wanna forget you.
And I wanna stop crying about thinking to tell this to you,
I wanna get those thoughts out of my head just for you.
I need you to be here,
but you don't see me crying.
I need you to be near,
but you don't hear my heavy sighing.
And now you want me to tell you,
how and why I become so new.
The answer is not clear to you,
'cause you don't know it was sometimes worse with you.
Odgovori:
Zabaven odgovor
Najboljši odgovor
Super odgovor
Dober odgovor
Odgovor
Neprimeren odgovor
Nerazumljiv odgovor
Omggggggggggg! To je tok lepo in hkrati čustveno napisan. Like that's me rn tko ta pesm sm js zdej hahaha. Love it<3
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Zabaven odgovor
Najboljši odgovor
Super odgovor
Dober odgovor
Odgovor
Neprimeren odgovor
Nerazumljiv odgovor
Čutovito!! fuuul si nadarjena. obožujem tvoje poete🤍
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Teja
Moj odgovor:
puncaa
potrebuje pomoč ali nasvet v
Svetovalnica
rabm iskreno mnenje! - prosm preber
Torej, grem kr na problem:
js šepam. Ko sem vprašala sestro, je rekla, da je ful opazno, in da se (ko hodm) preveč nagibam v levo desno stran. Moja samozavest je bla že tko slaba, zdej je pa sam še slabš! :(
Zanima me, kaj bi si vi mislil o taki osebi, če bi jo vidl? (prosm za iskreno mnenje, ne bom užaljena) A mislte, da nimam šans s fanti?
(Btw stara sm 16.) Drgač probam šepanje izboljšat (z boljšo držo) - bomo vidl, kako bo (če ma kdo še kakšne ideje za izboljšanje/prikritje šepanja, lahko napiše).
Lp, vesela bom vsazga odgovora
js šepam. Ko sem vprašala sestro, je rekla, da je ful opazno, in da se (ko hodm) preveč nagibam v levo desno stran. Moja samozavest je bla že tko slaba, zdej je pa sam še slabš! :(
Zanima me, kaj bi si vi mislil o taki osebi, če bi jo vidl? (prosm za iskreno mnenje, ne bom užaljena) A mislte, da nimam šans s fanti?
(Btw stara sm 16.) Drgač probam šepanje izboljšat (z boljšo držo) - bomo vidl, kako bo (če ma kdo še kakšne ideje za izboljšanje/prikritje šepanja, lahko napiše).
Lp, vesela bom vsazga odgovora
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vse najbolse:heart::purple_heart::blue_heart::green_heart::yellow_heart:!
i love itttttttt:heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart::heart::heart::purple_heart:sama ...
mac tko kt vedno dbest ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!