Pisalnicano hope and no light
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once some girl had scars so deep
she'd dream about them in her sleep
she'd think with words that hold no meaning
but reality always struck her after dreaming
blinded in love the pain she'd ignore
she cried and screamed, but kept asking for more
she wasn't at peace till she was covered in scars
no people around, just moon and the stars
she thought that she loved but instead there was hate
she told him about it but got excuse of fate
she thought of escaping but maybe it wasn't that bad
the pain was real, but he was that all she had
but time after time she gave up on her life
and she stood in the kitchen, holding a knife
there was no place in here for her heart
and now she's lying dead, her neck cut apart
she'd dream about them in her sleep
she'd think with words that hold no meaning
but reality always struck her after dreaming
blinded in love the pain she'd ignore
she cried and screamed, but kept asking for more
she wasn't at peace till she was covered in scars
no people around, just moon and the stars
she thought that she loved but instead there was hate
she told him about it but got excuse of fate
she thought of escaping but maybe it wasn't that bad
the pain was real, but he was that all she had
but time after time she gave up on her life
and she stood in the kitchen, holding a knife
there was no place in here for her heart
and now she's lying dead, her neck cut apart
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wow odlične pesmi mi je zelo všeč kako prikažeš ta čustva in vse skupaj in to da si me znova spravila v jok res kapo dol imaš talent zato in kar nadaljuj s tem mogoče boš daleč prišla in kdaj izdala lastno pesniško zbirko
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... Manon a si ti v redu? Ker tko vem da jst nisem, ker sm skor spet jokat začela, ampak tko mene genuinely skrbi zate atp.
Ne ampak to je tako dobro pls če te to veseli da daješ ven in pišeš nadaljuj, ker tako zelo čutim vse kar napišeš, it's something else, ok
<333333
~Sending loads of love, Raven
Ne ampak to je tako dobro pls če te to veseli da daješ ven in pišeš nadaljuj, ker tako zelo čutim vse kar napišeš, it's something else, ok
<333333
~Sending loads of love, Raven
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me zanima ali so ti dovolili hodit na normalno solo al mors hodit na solo za dusevno motene.
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jozo bi te rad pobozo
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Hey, ManonWhitethorn! <3
Tudi jaz res upam, da si v redu in če rabiš kakšen pogovor mi lahko komot sporočiš in se dobiva v klepetalnici. Tvoja pesem je izjemna kot vedno! Čisto vsaka beseda se vtisne v moje srce in resnično lahko čutim, kar čutiš ti. Ampak ne glede na vse ostani močna in ne pusti, da negativna čustva prevladajo. Tudi če se ti zdi, da nimaš nikogar in nikomur ni mar zate, je meni mar. Čeprav te ne zares poznam, si bila v mojih očeh vedno izjemno nadarjena punca in res bi bilo škoda tvojega talenta. Verjamem tudi, da si super oseba in nikoli ne obupaj nad pisanjem!
In seveda ne zmeni se za ljudi, ki nimajo nič drugega za delat in zato pišejo nesramne komentarje kot je tisti zgoraj!
Stojim ti ob strani! <3
iMusic
Tudi jaz res upam, da si v redu in če rabiš kakšen pogovor mi lahko komot sporočiš in se dobiva v klepetalnici. Tvoja pesem je izjemna kot vedno! Čisto vsaka beseda se vtisne v moje srce in resnično lahko čutim, kar čutiš ti. Ampak ne glede na vse ostani močna in ne pusti, da negativna čustva prevladajo. Tudi če se ti zdi, da nimaš nikogar in nikomur ni mar zate, je meni mar. Čeprav te ne zares poznam, si bila v mojih očeh vedno izjemno nadarjena punca in res bi bilo škoda tvojega talenta. Verjamem tudi, da si super oseba in nikoli ne obupaj nad pisanjem!
In seveda ne zmeni se za ljudi, ki nimajo nič drugega za delat in zato pišejo nesramne komentarje kot je tisti zgoraj!
Stojim ti ob strani! <3
iMusic
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