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ČE BI BILA V WARRIOR CATSU.. - 2. del

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*b* THUNDERCLAN - CAUGHT BY TWO-LEGS PT. 2 *b*
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I noticed a small opening. I looked through it and saw the two-legs that captured me talking. The one that I bit was walking around the room angrily " That damn cat! It bit me and now my hand hurts.. a lot.. " The other two-leg shrugged " Eh, coul've been worse Micheal. Remember, ya better get used too it if ya wanna continue! " I trotted back too Mixed Splotch. Apperently the two-legs have been doing this capturing for quite a while. I suppose the other cats escaped though, since they weren't here. I sat down near the WindClan cat as his head turned towards me. His eyes flashed in my direction. I knew he was eager too figure out what I overheard. I sigh, shaking my head. It was a sign I didn't find out anything interesting. The Calico looked disppointed. Though I spoke calmly when I asked " But my question is, how did you even get captured? " The Tom looked away is if it was quite a painful memory. As he spoke, his voice started too shake " Well.. "

*b**i* MIXED SPLOTCH'S STORY *i**b*

" It all started when I was hunting for the first time. It was Leaf-Fall ( Autumm ) and our kill pile was getting low. I was excited since the leader had chosen me too hunt for our clan. As Excited I was, so was I clueless about all the dangers lurking on our fields. You have too understand, I was still quite young. I was killing prey sucessfully, I was dragging more and more meat with me. At last, I was sure we had enough. Though I spotted one more bunny in the distance. I thought it would be a good idea too catch it but I didn't know how big of a mistake that was. As I was approaching the bunny, I heard a sound. It was like.. Something was approaching me. Or.. Someone. I ignored the sound ready too pounce on the bunny but.. Before I even layed one paw on it, something grabbed me. It was those filthy two-legs! " His voice was filled with anger and disgust as he said the last words of that sentence " They stuffed me in a bag, dragging me away. And since then.. I've been here. All these moons.. Wasted. "

I listened too the story curiously. It was very interesting, I frowned as I did feel bad for Mixed Splotch. Spending all his moons in a two-leg's nest? That must be horrible.. I had too figure out how too escape. And quickly. I heard the door open, standing up quickly. I hissed fiercly as a two-leg entered with two bowls of KittyPet food.

*i* TO BE CONTINUED.. *i*
 

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Heyla,
ta zgodba je zakon. Me je kar povlekla vase. Res dobro pišeš v angleščini in imaš res dober besedni zaklad, boljši kot ga imam jaz (zato ne razumem pol besed :joy::sweat_smile::laughing:). V glavnem res dobro. Nimam pripomb.
Hvala, ker si me obvestila o novem delu.
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Aw hvala <3
( lol ne skrbi še veliko ljudi je ki imajo večji besedni zaklad )

Ni zakaj :D
 
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Ful dobra zgodba :0
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Hvala za pohvalo ^^
 
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Hej!

Spet, zelo dober del. Imaš veliko domišljije in dobro angleščino (na mojo srečo, sem vse razumela :D).
Nadaljuj takole in čimprej nov del.
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Hvala <3

Že delam na nov del! ^^
 

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Hejjj!!! Jz sm 9. razred in lani sm sla na informativne na Lavo pa mi ni bilo tok usec. Letos sem pa sla na Kajuha in GCC. Zdaj se pa odlocam med GCC in Kajuhom. Najprej sm razmislala da bi sla na GCC ampak zdaj sm bila na informativnih na Kajuhu in mi je bilo bolj usec ( predstavitev, prehrana, ljudje, sola po zgledu in tudi menda imajo usi napovedana sprasevanja). Problem pa je da je baje najtezja gimazija in se jz ze zdaj veliko ucim da imam petice.
A gdo hodi na kiro od njih da mi lahko kaj svetuje (pove pluse in minuse).
Pa kaksen je bil razlog da ste se odlocl za kiro od teh dveh gimnazij. Hvalaaa ze za odgovore♡
 

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