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Res bi mi pomagali

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Hej!
Od vas bi rabila pomoč. V ponedeljek imam govorni nastop v angleščini in sem ravnokar sestavila besedilo. Zdaj pa bi rabila vse vas, ki znate dobro angkeščino, namreč moja nagleščina je obup, kakšno je tudi besedilo. Res bi bila presrečna če si si kdo vzel 10 minut in bi mi popravil beselilo(verjetno bi bilo potrebno popraviti čase, slovnične napake in res bi bila vesela, če bi besedilo malo poenostavili, daa nebi bilo toliko teških besed noter). Jaz res res upam da ne zahtevam preveč, ampak rešili me boste če mi popravite.
No tukaj je besedilo:
Hello, I am Xxxx and today I will tell you something about my future.When I grow up I wanna be a atress. I chose this job because I enyoy when I am playing. I can forgets everything else and contrecate just in my role. In this job you can become everybody and everyone and that is it, what do this job that special.
Actors express ideas and portray characters in theater, film, television, and other performing arts media. They interpret a writer’s script to entertain or inform an audience. Depending on the type of role the player plays, a variety of masks, accessories and support are also used. Before the actors start playing, set designers, make-up artists and many others also have a lot of work to do.
Most actors struggle to find steady work, and few achieve recognition as stars. ACTORS PLAY IN THEATER AND IN MOVIES. Most actors have long periods of unemployment between roles and often do other work to be able to survive. Work assignments are usually short, ranging from 1 day to a few months. Some actors in touring companies may be employed for several years.
I wanted to become an actress from a young age, but when I started going to a theater club, my desire became even stronger.
The actor continues to do elementary school, of course. He then goes to high school. The choice of high school is not so important, gymnasiums are recommended, and in Slovenia we also have an Art Gymnasium, a drama and theater department. The actor then receives an appropriate education at the Academy of Theater, Radio, Film and Television. After completing hher studies,she acquires the title of university graduate actor. Actors who do not have a college degree may take acting or film classes to learn their craft. Community colleges, acting conservatories, and private film schools typically offer these classes. Many theater companies also have education programs.
Actor should have Creativity, Memorization skills,Persistence,Physical stamina,Reading skills and Speaking skills and they shouldn’t be shy.
I’m not sure if I’m good for this profession, but I think if you really want something, you’ll make an effort to do it. But I also enjoy being on stage and I think that’s an important point for success.
 

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Today i will talk about my future........enjoy........forget.....concentrate.......

what do this job that special. ?????? What is this job so special.........


ok res se mi ne da ampak zaenkrat maš neki....
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Dober odgovor
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hei, jaz ti bom celo besedilo sem notri kopirala in delala popravke, ce bo tako ok :)

Hello, I am Xxxx and today I will tell you something about my future.When I grow up I wanna be an actress. I chose this job because I enjoy when I am playing. I can forget everything else and concentrate just in my role. In this job you can become everybody and everyone and that is it, what does this job that special.
Actors express ideas and portray characters in theater, film, television, and other performing arts media. They interpret a writer’s script to entertain or inform an audience. Depending on the type of role the player plays, a variety of masks, accessories and support are also used. Before the actors start playing, set designers, make-up artists and many others also have a lot of work to do.
Most actors struggle to find steady work, and few achieve recognition as stars. ACTORS PLAY IN THEATER AND IN MOVIES. Most actors have long periods of unemployment between roles and often do other work to be able to survive. Work assignments are usually short, ranging from 1 day to a few months. Some actors in touring companies may be employed for several years.
I wanted to become an actress from a young age, but when I started going to a theater club, my desire became even stronger.
The actor continues to do elementary school, of course. He then goes to high school. The choice of high school is not so important, gymnasiums are recommended, and in Slovenia we also have an Art Gymnasium, a drama and theater department. The actor then receives an appropriate education at the Academy of Theater, Radio, Film and Television. After completing her studies, she acquires the title of university graduate actor. Actors who do not have a college degree may take acting or film classes to learn their craft. Community colleges, acting conservatories, and private film schools typically offer these classes. Many theater companies also have education programs.
Actor should have Creativity, Memorization skills,Persistence,Physical stamina,Reading skills and Speaking skills and they shouldn’t be shy.
I’m not sure if I’m good for this profession, but I think if you really want something, you’ll make an effort to do it. But I also enjoy being on stage and I think that’s an important point for success.


si pa imela zelo lepo ze napisano :)
ce je kje kaksna manjsa napaka tudi mislim da je vredu
sem pa sla cez celo besedilo, popravila kjer sem misla da je bla napaka, nisem ravno 100% da je vse ok, je pa zelo lepo napisano in mislim da se ucitelji ne sekirajo za kaksno manjso napako pri takem besedilu ;)
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Res hvala ti. Poslala sem besedilo tudi popraviti instagram profilu zdaj znam in mi je popravil. Ti ga lahko pošlem, da preveriš katera verzija je boljša?
 

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Hojjjj!
Jaz sem v enega fanta, ki je eno leto starejši. On me ne pozna. Sicer hodi na našo šolo in se ponavadi vidiva. Danes smo imeli plesni dan in smo plesali. In potem smo morali vsi 7.r pokazat ples in jaz sem ga vedno gledala on pa je mene parkrat pogledal. V bistvu sva izpostavila očesni stik. Nekaj dni nazaj, ko smo šli k drugemu predmetu sem se po pomoti zaletela v njega. Jaz sem se mu opravičevala on pa meni vredu je in se mi je nasmehnil. Prosim pomagajte. Kako naj vzpostavim čim boljši stik z njim. Strah me je tudi kaj bi mi na to rekli starši in sošolke.
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