A poem
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Silence
I close my eyes....silence.
The dark space in my mind where the thoughts are supposed to be.silent.empty.
I open my eyes.....silence.
The house, the home thats supposed to be screaming around me, at me even, with happines. silent.empty.
I go outside...silence.
The life that surounds me...silent.
The happy memories died, making space for new, not so happy ones.
Do i speak? No i am silent. At this point, I am silence itself. My mind-silent. My house-silent. My life-silent. No thoughts, no memories.
Just an empty shell with a beating heart struggling to find something worth it.
Am i right to be silent? To not speak at all?
And I just listen to myself disapearing into the empty space called my mind.
Where even the loudest of voices are quieted down.
Silenced.
I close my eyes....silence.
The dark space in my mind where the thoughts are supposed to be.silent.empty.
I open my eyes.....silence.
The house, the home thats supposed to be screaming around me, at me even, with happines. silent.empty.
I go outside...silence.
The life that surounds me...silent.
The happy memories died, making space for new, not so happy ones.
Do i speak? No i am silent. At this point, I am silence itself. My mind-silent. My house-silent. My life-silent. No thoughts, no memories.
Just an empty shell with a beating heart struggling to find something worth it.
Am i right to be silent? To not speak at all?
And I just listen to myself disapearing into the empty space called my mind.
Where even the loudest of voices are quieted down.
Silenced.
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bbg that's so beautifulllll talent massss remember that
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Moj odgovor:
love.L.girl
potrebuje pomoč ali nasvet v
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CRUSH
Hej,
tole je bl za fante ampak če kera punca zna odgovorit lahko:wink:
Torej jst mam enga sošolca k sva se v 5em ful dobr poštekala, ampak so naju skoz zafrkaval. In zdej ga skoz zafrkavajo z eno drugo. Pač ful me je blo strah da je v kkšno drugo- tko 3 bi še lahk ble. Ampak zdej sm dobla njegovo fonsko in mi je povedal da ene ne more prenašat, ena je tečna, ena pa oboje. In zdej me ni več strah ampak nevem kako bi prstopla,..... Pač fantje na kakšn način je vm najbl všeč da punce vprašajo, pa punce kako je kej blo pr vs(to lhk tut fantje povete).
Hvala za vsak odgovor
lysm
lovel.L.girl
tole je bl za fante ampak če kera punca zna odgovorit lahko:wink:
Torej jst mam enga sošolca k sva se v 5em ful dobr poštekala, ampak so naju skoz zafrkaval. In zdej ga skoz zafrkavajo z eno drugo. Pač ful me je blo strah da je v kkšno drugo- tko 3 bi še lahk ble. Ampak zdej sm dobla njegovo fonsko in mi je povedal da ene ne more prenašat, ena je tečna, ena pa oboje. In zdej me ni več strah ampak nevem kako bi prstopla,..... Pač fantje na kakšn način je vm najbl všeč da punce vprašajo, pa punce kako je kej blo pr vs(to lhk tut fantje povete).
Hvala za vsak odgovor
lysm
lovel.L.girl
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