Pisalnica
Tukaj bom objavila kakšno pesem. V pisanju sem nova in sploh ne vem a mi gre al ne zato sprejmem kritiko in predloge. Hvala!
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*b*I LOVE YOU*b*
Look at me just once, 'cause
everytime I see you, my heart bounce.
Even if you just smile at me,
even if you just blink me,
will be enough for me.
But you don't like me.
You like my best friend.
Why? Are we so deffrend?
Just you know why.
I wanna go over you.
I wanna stop thinking about you.
I wanna forget you.
But I can't becouse,
I love you.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*b*I LOVE YOU*b*
Look at me just once, 'cause
everytime I see you, my heart bounce.
Even if you just smile at me,
even if you just blink me,
will be enough for me.
But you don't like me.
You like my best friend.
Why? Are we so deffrend?
Just you know why.
I wanna go over you.
I wanna stop thinking about you.
I wanna forget you.
But I can't becouse,
I love you.
Odgovori:
Zabaven odgovor
Najboljši odgovor
Super odgovor
Dober odgovor
Odgovor
Neprimeren odgovor
Nerazumljiv odgovor
kok dobro!!! res maš talent
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Zabaven odgovor
Najboljši odgovor
Super odgovor
Dober odgovor
Odgovor
Neprimeren odgovor
Nerazumljiv odgovor
Super jee! Bi pa na tvojem mestu samo pazila na pravopis. Drugače je pa vse super in je pesem no poezija zelo realna<3
2
Moj odgovor:
Lilibili
potrebuje pomoč ali nasvet v
Svetovalnica
Help me
hejjj uglaunm mene je ful strah da se lejzbika oziroma bisexual iskreno nevem zakaj ampak vedno dvomim vase in res nocem biti lejzbika ali bisexual ker se mi zdi to cudno. ali mi lahko pomagate ugotoviti ce sem ali nisem. ubistvu je najbrz vzrok te dileme to da je tega ogromno na internetu in se nikoli nisem bila zaljubkjena v nobenega fanta pa sem stara skoraj 17. prosim pomagajteee
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