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*b*I LOVE YOU*b*
Look at me just once, 'cause
everytime I see you, my heart bounce.
Even if you just smile at me,
even if you just blink me,
will be enough for me.
But you don't like me.
You like my best friend.
Why? Are we so deffrend?
Just you know why.
I wanna go over you.
I wanna stop thinking about you.
I wanna forget you.
But I can't becouse,
I love you.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*b*I LOVE YOU*b*
Look at me just once, 'cause
everytime I see you, my heart bounce.
Even if you just smile at me,
even if you just blink me,
will be enough for me.
But you don't like me.
You like my best friend.
Why? Are we so deffrend?
Just you know why.
I wanna go over you.
I wanna stop thinking about you.
I wanna forget you.
But I can't becouse,
I love you.
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kok dobro!!! res maš talent
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Zabaven odgovor
Najboljši odgovor
Super odgovor
Dober odgovor
Odgovor
Neprimeren odgovor
Nerazumljiv odgovor
Super jee! Bi pa na tvojem mestu samo pazila na pravopis. Drugače je pa vse super in je pesem no poezija zelo realna<3
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Moj odgovor:
girlpower
potrebuje pomoč ali nasvet v
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UMIRAM
Js sm ful u enga in ga ful pogrešam in nevem kaj naj da ga nebom tok pogrešala, nimam njegove fonske k me je strah uprašat
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