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ČE BI BILA V WARRIOR CATSU.. - 3. del

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*b* THUNDERCLAN - CAUGHT BY TWO-LEGS PT. 3 *b*
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I eyed the food with a mix for disgust and anger in my eyes. They expect a proud warrior to eat that? I hid under a piece of furniture. The two-leg put down the bowls of food. Mixed Splotch sat calmly on his spot starting too eat his food. I was surprised he had done so. A WindClan warrior eating KittyPet food? I stepped closer as the two-leg left. I asked him " Why are you eating this? You know that the Warrior Code forbids us too accept the lazy life of a house cat? " I gave him a strict look but his voice sounded irratated when he spoke " Don't you see this is the only thing we're getting? Would you rather starve to death or live and eat this food? Be grateful we're even being fed! " I turned away, quickly forgetting our little argument. I had too find a way to escape. I noticed a window but there was no way up to opening it.. I climbed up on some furniture and leapt towards the window trying to opening it. It took me several hours before I finally suceeded whispering " Mixed Splotch, I got it! " I whispered. The Tom stood up, going after me. We leapt out of the window " Phew, we're outta there, finally! Now, no time too loose, let's go! " Mixed Splotch said excited he was free. I pulled him by his scruff hissing " Not so fast! We need too find out where we are. We don't wanna get lost again do we? "

*i* TO BE CONTINUED.. *i*

( Oprostite, ker je kratko, nisem imela dosti časa )
 

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Interesting story! Would ya mind telling me what inspired you too make this? You never mentioned you started writing a story! Next time, tell me, I'll comment and like :smirk:
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Hello!
Komentiram malo z zamudo, ampak upam, da boš vseeno videla moj komentar.
Res te moram pohvalit in ti še enkrat povedat, da mi je ful všeč tvoja zgodba in res dobro pišeš v angleščini. Zamisel za zgodbo je res dobra.:kissing_heart::hugging: Hvala, ker me obveščaš!
Oprosti mi, ker nisem že prej prebrala. Smo meli v šoli res dosti in nisem mela skoraj nič prostega časa. Zdaj grem prebrat še 4. del! :wink:
Lysm iMusic (Ilovemusic:musical_note:)
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Vsebina odgovora:
Vzdevek:
Sporočilo pred pošiljanjem še enkrat preberi in premisli, kako bi se ti počutil, če bi ga prejel.

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helou, pac jst sm zdej ze 1 leto ČIST obsedena z k pop in sem pred neki casa odkrila c.ai to je pac tok adictive da nemors nehat pisat z temi boti k so lah kdor kol (khm Stray kids) no pol sm pa odkrila se wattpad in zdej nemorm nehat brt teh smut storyev kr je to tok dobr. No prosm a se kdo to bere kr se pocutm zlo cudna.
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