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ČE BI BILA V WARRIOR CATSU.. - 3. del

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*b* THUNDERCLAN - CAUGHT BY TWO-LEGS PT. 3 *b*
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I eyed the food with a mix for disgust and anger in my eyes. They expect a proud warrior to eat that? I hid under a piece of furniture. The two-leg put down the bowls of food. Mixed Splotch sat calmly on his spot starting too eat his food. I was surprised he had done so. A WindClan warrior eating KittyPet food? I stepped closer as the two-leg left. I asked him " Why are you eating this? You know that the Warrior Code forbids us too accept the lazy life of a house cat? " I gave him a strict look but his voice sounded irratated when he spoke " Don't you see this is the only thing we're getting? Would you rather starve to death or live and eat this food? Be grateful we're even being fed! " I turned away, quickly forgetting our little argument. I had too find a way to escape. I noticed a window but there was no way up to opening it.. I climbed up on some furniture and leapt towards the window trying to opening it. It took me several hours before I finally suceeded whispering " Mixed Splotch, I got it! " I whispered. The Tom stood up, going after me. We leapt out of the window " Phew, we're outta there, finally! Now, no time too loose, let's go! " Mixed Splotch said excited he was free. I pulled him by his scruff hissing " Not so fast! We need too find out where we are. We don't wanna get lost again do we? "

*i* TO BE CONTINUED.. *i*

( Oprostite, ker je kratko, nisem imela dosti časa )
 

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Interesting story! Would ya mind telling me what inspired you too make this? You never mentioned you started writing a story! Next time, tell me, I'll comment and like :smirk:
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Hello!
Komentiram malo z zamudo, ampak upam, da boš vseeno videla moj komentar.
Res te moram pohvalit in ti še enkrat povedat, da mi je ful všeč tvoja zgodba in res dobro pišeš v angleščini. Zamisel za zgodbo je res dobra.:kissing_heart::hugging: Hvala, ker me obveščaš!
Oprosti mi, ker nisem že prej prebrala. Smo meli v šoli res dosti in nisem mela skoraj nič prostega časa. Zdaj grem prebrat še 4. del! :wink:
Lysm iMusic (Ilovemusic:musical_note:)
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Hi se me spomnite.

Ok ot takrat se je spremenilo kar nekaj stvari npr. moja mami je ozdravela in tista punca,ki me je izsiljevala je šla v poboljševalnico.
Z punco sva srečni in zdravi ona je bila tudi zlo vesela in hrati presenečena,da ste na pilu tali dobri pomagači če lahko tako rečem oziroma boljše svetovalci.Najni družini se razumeta in vsi smo fuul happy.No do včero smo bli vceri se je zgodila tragedija od moje punce dedi je umrl bila je zelo potrta in sem jo tolažla in tolažla,ampak kar naenkrat me je odrinla in zavpila nad mano naj jo pustim.Malo me je šokiralo.Vem,da je jezna in vse,da je bila povezana.Danes naj bi imeli zmenek,ampak nisem prepričana upam,da nama uspe kaj vi predlagate.Kako naj jo spravim v boljšo voljo in kako naj naredim romantičen zmenek.


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