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ČE BI BILA V WARRIOR CATSU.. - 2. del

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*b* THUNDERCLAN - CAUGHT BY TWO-LEGS PT. 2 *b*
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I noticed a small opening. I looked through it and saw the two-legs that captured me talking. The one that I bit was walking around the room angrily " That damn cat! It bit me and now my hand hurts.. a lot.. " The other two-leg shrugged " Eh, coul've been worse Micheal. Remember, ya better get used too it if ya wanna continue! " I trotted back too Mixed Splotch. Apperently the two-legs have been doing this capturing for quite a while. I suppose the other cats escaped though, since they weren't here. I sat down near the WindClan cat as his head turned towards me. His eyes flashed in my direction. I knew he was eager too figure out what I overheard. I sigh, shaking my head. It was a sign I didn't find out anything interesting. The Calico looked disppointed. Though I spoke calmly when I asked " But my question is, how did you even get captured? " The Tom looked away is if it was quite a painful memory. As he spoke, his voice started too shake " Well.. "

*b**i* MIXED SPLOTCH'S STORY *i**b*

" It all started when I was hunting for the first time. It was Leaf-Fall ( Autumm ) and our kill pile was getting low. I was excited since the leader had chosen me too hunt for our clan. As Excited I was, so was I clueless about all the dangers lurking on our fields. You have too understand, I was still quite young. I was killing prey sucessfully, I was dragging more and more meat with me. At last, I was sure we had enough. Though I spotted one more bunny in the distance. I thought it would be a good idea too catch it but I didn't know how big of a mistake that was. As I was approaching the bunny, I heard a sound. It was like.. Something was approaching me. Or.. Someone. I ignored the sound ready too pounce on the bunny but.. Before I even layed one paw on it, something grabbed me. It was those filthy two-legs! " His voice was filled with anger and disgust as he said the last words of that sentence " They stuffed me in a bag, dragging me away. And since then.. I've been here. All these moons.. Wasted. "

I listened too the story curiously. It was very interesting, I frowned as I did feel bad for Mixed Splotch. Spending all his moons in a two-leg's nest? That must be horrible.. I had too figure out how too escape. And quickly. I heard the door open, standing up quickly. I hissed fiercly as a two-leg entered with two bowls of KittyPet food.

*i* TO BE CONTINUED.. *i*
 

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Heyla,
ta zgodba je zakon. Me je kar povlekla vase. Res dobro pišeš v angleščini in imaš res dober besedni zaklad, boljši kot ga imam jaz (zato ne razumem pol besed :joy::sweat_smile::laughing:). V glavnem res dobro. Nimam pripomb.
Hvala, ker si me obvestila o novem delu.
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Aw hvala <3
( lol ne skrbi še veliko ljudi je ki imajo večji besedni zaklad )

Ni zakaj :D
 
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Hvala za pohvalo ^^
 
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Hej!

Spet, zelo dober del. Imaš veliko domišljije in dobro angleščino (na mojo srečo, sem vse razumela :D).
Nadaljuj takole in čimprej nov del.
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Hvala <3

Že delam na nov del! ^^
 

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