PisalnicaThe diary of the vampire from academy 1. del
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Dear diary,
I'm Charlotte, and I'm 15. Tomorow I'm going to the best school for vampires in the world. I'm from Kentucky, and my favorite artists are The Kentucky vampires. I'm will be writing to you, for the next four years, and every morning. And you should know: I'm a vampire, and my biggest enemy are humans. I'm so on my nerves, because of tomorow. I hope, I will be fine.
have a nice night,
Charlotte:bat:
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tukaj je nova zgodba, ki jo pišem na skupnem profilu. ne povem, kdo sem.
P. s. ali bi lahko kdo v komentarje napisal popravke pravopisnih napak, ker jih je ziher ogromno.
P. p. s. hvala ti Fluffychick
Lp, PILovka
I'm Charlotte, and I'm 15. Tomorow I'm going to the best school for vampires in the world. I'm from Kentucky, and my favorite artists are The Kentucky vampires. I'm will be writing to you, for the next four years, and every morning. And you should know: I'm a vampire, and my biggest enemy are humans. I'm so on my nerves, because of tomorow. I hope, I will be fine.
have a nice night,
Charlotte:bat:
________________
tukaj je nova zgodba, ki jo pišem na skupnem profilu. ne povem, kdo sem.
P. s. ali bi lahko kdo v komentarje napisal popravke pravopisnih napak, ker jih je ziher ogromno.
P. p. s. hvala ti Fluffychick
Lp, PILovka
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OK sori sam mal ponavlaš za Anchie in njeno zgodbo Vampirka:rage:!!!!!!!!
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Dear diary,
I'm Charlotte, and I'm 15. Tomorow I'm going to the best school for vampires in the world. I'm from Kentucky, and my favorite artists are The Kentucky vampires. I'm wonna writing you, next four years, every morning. And you shood now: I'm a vampire, and my bigest enemy is every human what I see. I'm so nerves, because tomorow. I hope, will be fine.
have a nice night,
Charlotte:bat:
popravljeno: Dear diary,
I'm Charlotte, and I'm 15. Tomorow I'm going to the best school for vampires in the world. I'm from Kentucky, and my favorite artists are The Kentucky vampires. I'm "will be" writing "to" you, "for the" next four years, "and" every morning. And you "should" "k"now: I'm a vampire, and my big"g"est enemy "are humans"//is every human what I see//. I'm so "on my" nerves, because "of" tomorow. I hope, "I" will be fine.
have a nice night,
Charlotte
Legenda:
//-izbrisano
"-popravljeno/dodano
upam da je prav.
lp,
fc
I'm Charlotte, and I'm 15. Tomorow I'm going to the best school for vampires in the world. I'm from Kentucky, and my favorite artists are The Kentucky vampires. I'm wonna writing you, next four years, every morning. And you shood now: I'm a vampire, and my bigest enemy is every human what I see. I'm so nerves, because tomorow. I hope, will be fine.
have a nice night,
Charlotte:bat:
popravljeno: Dear diary,
I'm Charlotte, and I'm 15. Tomorow I'm going to the best school for vampires in the world. I'm from Kentucky, and my favorite artists are The Kentucky vampires. I'm "will be" writing "to" you, "for the" next four years, "and" every morning. And you "should" "k"now: I'm a vampire, and my big"g"est enemy "are humans"//is every human what I see//. I'm so "on my" nerves, because "of" tomorow. I hope, "I" will be fine.
have a nice night,
Charlotte
Legenda:
//-izbrisano
"-popravljeno/dodano
upam da je prav.
lp,
fc
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debeluška
potrebuje pomoč ali nasvet v
Svetovalnica
Ne vem
kako naj shujšam?
prosim vas za nasvete kako shujšati. ne morem manj jesti, saj mi starši ne pustijo imam 4 obroke na dan in tega ne morem zmanjševati.
telovaditi tudi ne morem veliko, saj starši ne smejo ugotoviti, da hujšam, saj so proti.
starša svojega mnenja ne bodo spremenili ; ne smem hujšati, tako da pogovor z njimi odpade.
kaj so naravni načini, da izgubim težo, brez veliko telovadbe in brez zmanjsevanja obrokov?
vesela bom vsakega predloga
hvala vsakemu, ki mi bo pomagal.
prosim vas za nasvete kako shujšati. ne morem manj jesti, saj mi starši ne pustijo imam 4 obroke na dan in tega ne morem zmanjševati.
telovaditi tudi ne morem veliko, saj starši ne smejo ugotoviti, da hujšam, saj so proti.
starša svojega mnenja ne bodo spremenili ; ne smem hujšati, tako da pogovor z njimi odpade.
kaj so naravni načini, da izgubim težo, brez veliko telovadbe in brez zmanjsevanja obrokov?
vesela bom vsakega predloga
hvala vsakemu, ki mi bo pomagal.
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