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Never ending love 3. del

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Noah's POV:
I was still staring at her when Matt shake me out of my zone and suggested we go inside on a hot chocolate since it's freezing outside. I couldn't even answer when Chris had already grabbed my arm and pulled me inside with them. The moment the ring at the door ranged her head snapped back making an intense eye contact with me. Her eyes fixed on mine send chills down my spine and my body froze. My mind was having a party and I couldn't move until we were next in the line. We placed our order and sat down in a table behind Astoria and her two friends so if i move forward I could smell the perfume she always wears mixed with the vanilla canted hair shampoo. Her two friends were bragging about some date while she had all her focus on the screen of her laptop.
I knew Katie since she was Reggie’s boyfriend and I know Britney because she is at her house a lot. I am Atlases best friend so I am there practically everyday too so, I know who comes in and out of the house. Most of the time Astoria and Britney are hanging out in Astoria’s room but sometimes they hang in the living room so me and Atlas see them when we go to practice.
I love football since I was a 7-year-old kid and my dad played with me on our parking lot. We draw the goal on the garage door with a crayon and he would let me win all the time so I would not be sad. About 4 years later, he left. My parents got a divorce and me and my mom flew all the way from Edinburgh to London to start a new life. My mom is now remarried to some guy named Jake and I am living here for almost 7 years. I do not blame my father from leaving but sometimes I wish he were here. I really like Jake, he is nice, but we just didn’t made a deep connection, and after so many years, I don't see the point in trying.

Astoria's POV:
I am working on the twenty-first chapter when he stepped into the cafe. I didn't meant to look back but when the bell rang, I felt like someone was watching me. The second I saw him I regretted my decision because his eyes were stuck to mine. It felt weird and I don't think I can explain it.
It felt like a warm pair of hands were hugging my heart and mind and I couldn't think of anything else. I slowly turned back to Britney who didn't even notice anyone coming in. I tried to write again and it was as if the words were flying in my head and I just needed to put them together making the perfect sentences I needed. They sat behind us so I could feel his warmth on the back of my neck and smell his cologne. This is the first time I ever realized I liked his scent. it smelled so familiar yet so unfamiliar at the same time. I took a sip of my caramel and white chocolate latte and started writing again. This time I could not focus. His scent and the presence of his body were to close.
I drank what was else left in my cup and left the money for it on the table. I grabbed my stuff and laptop, said goodbye to Katie and Britney and left the Cafe in a hurry. As I was passing the window, I looked inside and saw Noah staring at me with a worried expression on his face. I could tell he was worried for me by the way his eyes were starring deep into my soul. I gave him a reassuring smile and walked to my car.
The whole drive home my mind was stuck in the moment we had right before I ran home. That look was full of worry, as if he was afraid that at any moment I would disappear forever.


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Hej hoj vsi!
Tukaj je že nov del moje zgodbe in upam,da vam je bil všeč.
Spodaj prilagam še sliko Astorie. (v naslednjem delu bo slika Noaha;))
Sending love
Vedno vaša Disney<3

 

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Hvala za pohvalo in ne to je prava oseba. Sliko sem našla na Pinterestu..
 
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Torej js bom star 12 januarja in imam punco, Niko (fake name), ki je stara 13. Moja punca je sošolka z mojim najboljšim prijateljem, recimo mu Oskar (fake name). Z Oskarjem sva prijatelja že dolgo časa in zadnje čase se mi zdi, da se obnaša zelo gejevsko do mene. Precej sem prepričan, da nisem gej, ampak me ne bi motilo, če bi bil z njim.

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